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"When I left for the REPF I broke Bristol's innocent heart. I made it worse by treating her to a lovely picnic at our favorite vantage point too. I thought it was the best farewell I could give her before I shipped out. We watched the most beautiful sunset I've ever seen as the sun fell behind Mt Ruapehu too. [link] [link] But...that's not what she saw.

She never said directly apart from screaming 'I HATE YOU KAIMANAWA! I HOPE YOU NEVER RETURN.' Before she ran off into the crowd at the pier. I guess...I guess that's proof enough. ~sigh~

I don't blame her either, I mean, I think back now and realise she probably thought that I finally wanted there to be more between us. All I could selfishly think was; 'This is my goodbye to you sis, a goodbye forever. I'm not coming home, at least not alive.' What a bucking idiot, what a young inexperienced colt...what did SHE do to deserve that.

I wonder if she dreams about me, I wonder if she has nightmares too?" [link]

The above wording is going to be in a story I write when Kai is sitting in his office alone one evening after getting a package from his mom. The pic will be the cover image

Here is the latest piece commissioned by me from the godly talented :iconshinepawpony: who's works never cease to astound with rich colours, deep and emotive mannerisms, fetching postures and amazing backgrounds.

I requested a picture of Bristol having a nightmare about Kaimanawa and the vivid image of him when he got his cutie mark. Note the blue not the blonde? Yes, that is intentional. Some may know but when Kai is at his emotional zenith his features turn two tone blue due to anger or paternal want to protect his Iwi (extended kinship group ie Bristol, Snowy, Rainbow Dash, Squadron mates ).

A very heart felt thanks Shine for this works and I look forward to your future works coming out.

I had no part in the actual work, only commission request but picture is uploaded so you call all experience her awesomeness.

Kaimanawa/Bristol (c) :icontempestwulf:
Art (c) :iconshinepawpony:
MLP G4 (c) :iconfyre-flye: & :iconhasbroplz:
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Wow this is pretty cool. I read the description and gathered that Kai has to go off to war and he tells Bristol on their date. She obviously didn't take that well at all and told him she wished for him to never return. If she is implying she wishes for him to not come back to her, that's a little harsh. But if she hopes he never returns from war, that's just jacked up. If he does die in your story, Bristol will most likely feel like crap for the last words she ever said to him. That's what I gather from the description. I'm sure I'm wrong on some things. Let me know if I muffed the setting at all. If this is a story you are writing, this sounds to be a interesting one.