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YAY I FINISHED IT!
I hope it's not to long as equal to 21 pages.
My first serious fan fiction of MLP:FIM. Was originally supposed to be a lead up to Kaimanawa origins but became a creature in it's own regard. I'll get to Kai's back story at some time.
The story takes place in a timeframe of pre WWII with the rise of Nationalist Socialist Party in Germane, the resentment still held over from WWI and the land taken in Treaty of Versailles. We start the story in Affenpinscher which is a canine land similar to Germany....
Please enjoy the read and comments are welcome. I hope you like it, I had fun writing it and hope to do some more in future.
The 'secret' language used is NZ Maori
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I hope it's not to long as equal to 21 pages.
My first serious fan fiction of MLP:FIM. Was originally supposed to be a lead up to Kaimanawa origins but became a creature in it's own regard. I'll get to Kai's back story at some time.
The story takes place in a timeframe of pre WWII with the rise of Nationalist Socialist Party in Germane, the resentment still held over from WWI and the land taken in Treaty of Versailles. We start the story in Affenpinscher which is a canine land similar to Germany....
Please enjoy the read and comments are welcome. I hope you like it, I had fun writing it and hope to do some more in future.
The 'secret' language used is NZ Maori
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A very nice story, it's really hard to set up a conflict without it being dry and boring. You managed to keep it entertaining, I can't wait to read more.